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Tumble, tears, tumble.
Today I will not stop you.

I gave the sign and now the guide rope has been cut
The ground has been flooded

The shrinking ledge on which I perch is now but a brief resting place:
A hard climb up? A painful fall down?

What is at the top?
What is at the bottom?

If I stay here in this tiny place with only room for one –
One scared
One unprepared –
How long before I tumble?

5 Comments Post a comment
  1. {{{hugs}}}


  2. Sorry – last comment was from me. {{{hugs}}}


  3. I hope you are feeling better now than this sounds xx


    • On and off, thank you, yes. Scary couple of weeks. And sorry I’m so behind with replying to comments xxx


  4. Liz Wood #

    I really like this, Rachel, esp. the first 5 lines, which I think are really poetic – taut, visual, metaphorical, dense.
    Mum xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx



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