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Incompatible

A flash

She said:
‘I prefer the brain and the personality I have now to the one I had when I was younger…
What a shame the body I had when I was younger was better than the one I have now…’
She shrugged.
‘But maybe the two were never compatible…’

He said:
‘What a shame we can’t go back in time.’

She said:
‘I wouldn’t go back even if I could,’ and opened the empty suitcase onto the bed, satisfied she was doing the right thing.

10 Comments Post a comment
  1. Sounds like a scene in a great play!

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    09/12/2011
  2. What a world of emotion you’ve captured in so few words here Rachel. Excellent!

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    09/12/2011
  3. Capturing so much emotion and feeling in so few words is very hard, but you made this look easy. Not a word wasted in this excellent flash.

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    09/12/2011
  4. That is a brutal twist, and so well done.

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    09/12/2011
  5. Peter Spenser #

    Wow.

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    10/12/2011
  6. You really packed a lot into so few words. Very nice!

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    11/12/2011
  7. Being satisfied with ourselves and our choices – doesn’t seem like it should be as hard as it is. Nice.

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    11/12/2011
  8. Kathryn #

    Bravo!

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    13/12/2011
  9. Ahh… This is wonderful.

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    04/01/2012
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    09/04/2013

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