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Papillon

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  1. I think the term that best describes this piece is enchanting. A wonderful mysterious quality and a perfectly inflected tone. very nice.

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    23/07/2010
  2. Rachel #

    Thank you very much Michael. Lovely feedback

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    23/07/2010
  3. yearzerowriters #

    very lyrical, poetic piece. Loved the metaphor of the butterflies emerging from the ukelele

    marc nash

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    23/07/2010
    • Rachel #

      Thank you Marc. High praise indeed 🙂 I appreciate it

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      23/07/2010
  4. Quite a magical story! I really enjoyed it.

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    23/07/2010
    • Rachel #

      Thanks Eric! I really enjoyed writing it

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      24/07/2010
  5. A delight of a story!
    Love the last line, very much in character with Edouard!

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    24/07/2010
    • Rachel #

      Thanks for visiting again 🙂

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      24/07/2010
  6. All the best writers live in Devon 🙂 This was beautiful Rachel, great characters, lovely descriptions and imagery. Well done.

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    25/07/2010
  7. Rachel #

    Thank you Clive 🙂

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    28/07/2010

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