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4th October

smell of still-warm ground
after cold October night
summer’s slow breath out

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  1. That last line is a perfect description of this time of year. 🙂


  2. Shannon #

    This one belongs on the A list.


  3. I think that final line is very good. It feels so right when you say it out loud. I can’t help but say it while exhaling a single breath. I now have word envy!



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