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Sunflowers

As daylight hours wane
Tired petals abandon heads
Sun seeking ceases

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  1. Hours and tired. One syllable or two? I’ve confused myself.

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    07/09/2009
  2. Louisa Lemon #

    I decided on one (read as ours and tir’d). But if I’m not allowed to do that, then it’s 2 and not a conventional English 5,7,5 haiku! Works either way in my naive little uneducated mind! 😉

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    07/09/2009

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